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Year 11 Paper 1 baseline assessment: Learner response

  Year 11 Paper 1 baseline assessment: Learner response 1) Type up your feedback in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to). WWW:  Chea, lovely attempt at textual analysis of the unseen print advert  Next Steps/EBI: (1) Q3 on narrative features was just describing the advert rather than applying narrative features. (2) Revise social, cultural, historical contexts of Tatler CSP. LR: See blog 2) Look at the  mark scheme for this assessment . For Question 2 (12 mark unseen) use the indicative content in the mark scheme to identify three points that you could have referred to in your answer. . I could've given more effective terminology. . I could've gone deeper into the meaning than most stating the detail. . I could've provided more detail into my connotations making them stand out more. 3) For Question 3 (Galaxy - narrative features) use the mark scheme to write down the main narrative theories and how we can link them to t...